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TWILIGHT

on the new day twilight
lying down
with the dream interrupted by the last urination
simply
I feel good
numbed in body languor
faded
discounting the minutes left
to get up

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ao lusco fusco do novo dia
deitado
com o sonho interrompido pela última micção
simplesmente
sinto-me bem
amodorrado no langor do corpo
esvaído
descontando os minutos que faltam
para me levantar

by Armando TABORDA, 2022
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19 comments

Armando Taborda said:

Thanks for fave, Paolo Tanino, Nouchetdu38, Stephan Fey, Fred Fouarge, beapixa, homaris, aNNa schramm, and Frans Schols!
22 months ago ( translate )

Ulrich John said:

Fantastic, Armando !
22 months ago ( translate )

Armando Taborda replied to Ulrich John:

Many thanks, John!
22 months ago

Annemarie said:

beautiful mood
Happy Sunday:)
22 months ago

Armando Taborda replied to Annemarie:

Many thanks, Annemarie! Kiss!
22 months ago

Malik Raoulda said:

Une atmosphère de rêve avec un texte correspondant.
Bonne et agréable journée dominicale.
22 months ago ( translate )

Armando Taborda replied to Malik Raoulda:

Deux fois merci, Malik! Bon dimanche!
22 months ago ( translate )

vero said:

magique Armando très bon dimanche bisous
22 months ago ( translate )

Armando Taborda replied to vero:

Merci, vero! Bisous!
22 months ago ( translate )

cammino said:

Eine geheimnisvolle Aufnahme, passend zum Text.
22 months ago ( translate )

Armando Taborda replied to cammino:

Thanks twice, cammino!
22 months ago ( translate )

Esther said:

A unique approach to the challenge. Well done.
22 months ago

Armando Taborda replied to Esther:

Well, maybe it's not unique, but at least it's one approach as you said, Esther! Thanks very much!
22 months ago

Gillian Everett said:

A beautiful twilight
22 months ago

Xata said:

Out of the box thinking Armando, fica a curiosidade sobre o pontinho branco: vela ou gaivota?
Ler o teu poema estando ainda na cama a ver as nuvens coloridas do dia a abrir com fundo sonoro de mar e vento foi o máximo, obrigada !
22 months ago ( translate )