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Song of the Sea - Compass

In this town,
I lose my way more than once.
Until there is nothing
To lose.
I walk.
I shelter.
With others who do not speak
And I do not speak to.
Steel cuts through the sky.
I breathe in the storms
Now frequent
In inevitability.
I find the pier by accident
In fire charred
Ashes of innocence.
Consumed by the shrieks
Of its fairground past.
I try to climb higher,
To get a better view,
Hoping that sublimity
Will transfigure,
But the stench of
The gaslight overwhelms.
The sea cannot
Heal its wounds.
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11 comments

Don Sutherland said:

Superb capture.
2 days ago ( translate )

Boro said:

Superbe ***********
2 days ago ( translate )

William Sutherland said:

Excellent shot and poem!
2 days ago

Amelia said:

Superb light on the Weston-super-Mare pier. I love piers, but we have not visited this one.
2 days ago

Rachel J Bowler replied to Amelia:

It's the ruins of Birnbeck Pier, which has been closed since 1994.
2 days ago

Keith Burton said:

A dramatic sky, gorgeous light (especially on the wet sand), and the silhouetted pier are all beautiful. A wonderful capture Rachel.
45 hours ago

Jocelyne Villoing said:

Superbe image !*************
40 hours ago ( translate )

Rachel J Bowler replied to Boro:

:-D
17 hours ago ( translate )

Marek Ewjan Stachows… said:

lovely picture
→ have a good day, Rachel!
39 hours ago

Patrick Brandy said:

Merveilleuse photo belle journée.
56 minutes ago ( translate )