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Haiku(s)
From wikapedia: Haiku (俳句) is a type of short form poetry originally from Japan.Traditional Japanese haiku consist of three phrases that contain a kireji, or "cutting word", 17 on (a type of Japanese phoneme) in a 5, 7, 5 pattern, and a kigo, or seasonal reference.However, modern haiku vary widely on how closely they follow these traditional elements.

I often run a 4-7-4 pattern, I'm wondering if that cadence works better in English.

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Alaskan spring time
May showers bring June flowers
A month late but great!
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I’ve a marmot
Digging under my wood pile
My new neighbor
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Today was warm
But nights are getting longer
So soon, winter.
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2020
A year we’ll all remember
But not fondly.
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Morning sunshine
A long day among the spruce
Cool evening.
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Brew day today
I blend my White Nights Stout
And wait and wait.
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Two cords firewood,
Spruce, birch a little alder.
Should last till spring.
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A light snowfall
Continuing day and night,
Deep snow cover.

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Heavy rain today
Silence is quite deafening
After the deluge.
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The fourth day of June
The sun shines after midnight
Home in Alaska.

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I am reading now
The Roar of Queen Srimala
A Buddhist Sutra.

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Snow covers the ground
Mist shrouding the distant hills
Fine October day!

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In the north country,

May showers bring June flowers,
Anticipation!

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Snow slid off the roof
Sakura portends Japan's spring
Ours is avalanche!
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The snow is slipping
Falling from sun warmed spruce boughs
Not spring yet, but close!
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Rose skies, east and west
As dawn lights up the arctic,
Fine winter morning!
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I had my coffee.

Next, off to the polls to vote
Time to change the world!
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It is today here

In Japan it's tomorrow.
Were is yesterday?
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Early Saturday.
The sun hasn't come up yet
Lighting the wood stove.
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The sun's in my eyes
and the wind is at my back,
walking through the snow.
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You see it yourself
Some days are warm some days cold
$cience is $ettled.
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Brown leaves are buried
'neath a layer of white snow,
Bare branches lament.
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Seventy eight years
I've observed the passing days
Emerge from winter.
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Gabby Gabriel
Gave Gordy green gruesome grubs
Gord gave Gabe glum gawks.

OK, not really haiku but some days seem to start this way.

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Green red and yellow
Leaves covered with frost crystals.
Autumn frost magic!
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Had a frost last night
All my flowers are wilted
Autumn in August.

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A few yellow leaves
The nights are getting longer
My firewood's stacked.

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We've more rain today
Rain means it's spring in haiku
Endless springtime here!
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Large trees floating past
The river is at flood stage
Nature's spring cleaning.

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Rain in Osaka
I head to Kansai Airport
Leaving storms behind.

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Almost deafening.
Calling through the morning mist.
A heard of ravens.
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Early summer rain
The low clouds obscure the view
Mountains are hidden.

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Cool rainy weather
At Takanoko Onsen
Hot soak and sauna.
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Hooligan Ravens.
Five O'clock in the morning.
Challenging the day.
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At Sea Mount Castle
Watching rains sweeping Seto sea
Misty memories.
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Down by the water
Sakura in my sake
At Tanukii's shrine.

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Light dusting of snow

Only fresh tracks I can see

Are mine and the squirrel's.

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Bright crystal islands
Ice floating on the river
Soon all will be still.
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Walking in birch woods
Golden leaves fall behind me
I'm leaving no tracks.

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Rain on a tin roof

A monotonous refrain

Remember summer.

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Down at the river
Not one person notices
When the frog jumps out.
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Big moose on the trail
Thinks that he has right of way.
I agree, turn home.
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Yellowed leaves dropping
More and more each day as we
Rush in to winter.

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Rain runs down my neck
Still this job need be finished
Before the snow falls.

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Light frost on the grass
Smell of wood smoke in the air
Nice autumn morning.
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Chopping firewood
Bit of summer exercise
For next winter's warmth!
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A blanket of snow

Hides all my summer mistakes

Now I can relax!

I thought it was spring
But the groundhog disagreed
Winter's six more weeks.
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Sit sipping sake
Watch the rabbit in the moon
Above the gate tree.
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Strong winds blew all night
Rainy day in Senrioka
No more Sakura.
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Japan's sakura
Alaska's pussy willows
Harbingers of spring!
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It's a lot of work
Getting ready for winter
but I enjoy it!

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9 comments

Jim O'Neil said:

Thanks!
10 years ago

Ishida Kumiko said:

love them
10 years ago

Cat Shilova said:

I knew and appreciated your skills in drawing, now I discover that you are a multi-facettes-talented man...
Beautiful tiny poems... Haïkus can be so talkative...
10 years ago

Jim O'Neil replied to Cat Shilova:

Ah, shucky darn, thanks Cat! :-)
My favorite haiku poet is Masaoka Shiki, if someone asks...
10 years ago

Jim O'Neil said:

The thought, yes, though the form is generally 3 lines with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second and 5 in the last.
7 years ago

Eric Desjours said:

I do like your short cuts . Evocative and dense ; and light at the same time.
5 years ago

Jim O'Neil said:

Thanks Eric. If you can find Masaoka Shiki's Haikus I expect you'd enjoy them. He did a lot to bring the rarefied form down to a common level.
5 years ago

Eric Desjours replied to Jim O'Neil:

Fascinating... even in their French translation.
Thanks Jim.
5 years ago ( translate )

Steve Bucknell said:

Delightful. You bring Japan to Alaska to us.
3 years ago ( translate )